I know people are having trouble with part b's, so here's a good example plan of a philosophy part B. I haven't written it out in full, but you get the idea, and I'll write it up in full when I have more time on my hands.
b) Evaluate whether the teleological argument stands up to criticism. (10)
I believe that the teleological argument does stand up to criticism.
First paragraph:
Point: Based on Natural Theology, we can observe order, purpose and regularity (OPR) in the world, therefore it is difficult to criticise the first premise of the teleological argument's logic.
Counter-point: The OPR in the world does not necessarily suggest there is a designer - Darwinism/evolution/natural selection shows that complexity can exist without a designer.
Counter-counter-point: Evolution could have been part of God's plan - God created a design with the potential to improve itself, therefore the design argument is still valid.
Second paragraph:
Point: One of Hume's criticisms is that the world is imperfect, therefore couldn't have been designed. However Aquinas/Paley never said that the world was perfect in their arguments, they just stated that OPR suggests a designer.
Counter-point: Mill's criticism develops the idea of imperfections, states that evil in the world suggests that either there is an evil designer or no designer, and the latter option is more likely.
Counter-counter-point: There are other reasons for the existence of evil, for example God allowing us to have free will/be moral. There is still complexity, therefore this still points to there being a designer.
Conclusion: argument does stand up to criticism. Some strong criticisms put forward by Hume and Mill, but they do little to disprove the teleo argument.
Hope this helps!
Hey is this exactly what you would write word for word in the essay or a summary of your essay? Its a really nice layout but did you get 10/10 for this?
ReplyDeleteThis blog is really helping me out by the way thanks dude.
No this is just a rough outline, you'd have to expand slightly on the points to make them into proper paragraphs! But yes I showed this plan to my teacher and he said it'd be 10/10 if written out in full. Glad I can help man.
DeleteThanks, is it over the top to do an argument then a counter then a counter counter and then counter the counter counter all in one paragraph? And is it ok to bring in views of many different philosophers in a part b?
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Nope not at all, that's the structure I normally use in essays, to make sure your line of argument is really clear throughout! And yes that's definitely recommended for part b questions, while it's good to show you have an opinion, it's even better to show it's being supported by other philosophers' theories. Good luck for tomorrow!
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